Mars - (my Original Music)

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  1. Australian

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    Here is a piece I've been finishing.
    Its not the final version, but just interested if its good or bad? ;)

     
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    Love it.

    Oz...quit fucking around. You got good stuff. Real good.

    Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed it. Everything you put in to it.
     
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    You put some nice touches on that one. I've enjoyed it a few times now. The synths and bass sound great too. :yesway:
     
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  4. Australian

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    Thanks Solar. :yesway:
    I hope to finish some more of these music projects that I have ready to put the finishing touches on this year.
     
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  5. Australian

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    Thanks. If you listened to it more than once, then it musnt be too shabby.
    It still has some work left to complete it, but at least now I know its not complete a failure. :)
     
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    Hi Aus,

    Man, that sounds excellent! I like the layers and the mood of it. Very nice playing on it.. tones too. Bravo. Is that you on bass too?
     
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  7. Australian

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    Glad you got the vibe of it.
    Yes me on the bass and drums. I think this song started out recording a test drum beat getting my Roland drums connected through the Logic drum kit. I still need to put some drum fill-ins, and drop the drums out in a couple of places.
     
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    That's great Aus. It sounds really cool! I can hear all of the work you've put in it!
     
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    It's good.
     
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    Aussie, the imagination and the effort is fantastic.
    You have created a really nice sounding bass tone there and I think it should be utilized more with, instead of single root notes, a more melodic approach would do wonders for the composition.
    Would like to hear a more creative approach to the drums also.
    There was a stretch there where the multiple melodic guitar lines became somewhat confusing.
    Perhaps a tad bit of over kill there.
    I genuinely appreciated the listen.
    Thank you for that.
    BP
    p.s. It's good.
     
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  11. Australian

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    Tenk yoo soh mooch. :h5:
     
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    I’ve got ideas for the drums; the other things like bass, I might tighten in places, but will most likely not change the notes
    The guitars will be more ducking little sections out rather than re-doing them.

    Thanks for the feedback.
     
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    On maybe my 16th repeat. It's really moody, just like me. Captures quite an ambiguous mood. I could listen to it for hours.
     
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  14. Australian

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    Cool. Good vibes.
    But I’m losing money here. I need to set up a pay per play- asap! :):band:
     
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    Dude, nice. Really cool moods with those progressions. And those keys at the end gives it an ethereal quality.
     
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    Sounds great Aus! Different and interesting....i like.
     
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    Really cool Aus. Production is very good and the layers sound terrific. Would like to hear more from you. You have some amazing vocals as well (Dokken-like). Man, you're a talented dude!!

    DP
     
  18. Australian

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    Thanks DP. I’ve got some things on the go.
    There’s a song that I’d like to put up on the forum soon.
     
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  19. Australian

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    Glad you liked it.
    It’s a thing that I started about a year ago and left. Now was the time to complete it.

    This might cause some boos from the crowd but its all Kemper, even the bass guitar. :)
     
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    Thanks. Thats why I thought it would be worth finishing, the mood. It is what it is.
     
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